Further Feedback - OUGD505, Studio Brief 02

After showing the poster designs to peers and to tutors it was suggested that the designs be cut out physically and then scanned back in. This is something to try for development and does make sense to the designs it is just whether or not a quicker method would make more sense to production and costs. It was also suggested that the video use this same paper cut style rather than being solely digital text to tie it together and get away from this text heavy design that just looks off putting. More ties to the charities involved are needed, this goes for all the product being made. Information should be taken from these charities and other sources but should mainly focus on the charities backing the project.